How about ... 'Her eyes widened, the walls seemed to move in on her. Her mouth opened but she couldn't speak! Oh why didn't I let mom come with me? she thought.' "No, no, it's $75.00, sorry, don't faint on me! Your little brother put me up to this! He's in the same class as Kevin, my son. He's apparently quite jealous that you were allowed to get a tattoo. Ha ha ha so sorry about that, forgive me? Are you feeling a little better now?" Jen, maybe this might give you a new idea. Or maybe someone else can suggest another direction. I'm so glad to hear from you again though! Barbara
Jen, maybe you'd like to come up with a whole new story line. Some writers do that. They begin writing a story and then they leave it and begin another. They'll do that until the story they're on begins to flow until they have a book. I've heard interviews with writers who describe the struggle to write a book. It's often like that. Barbara
Okay Jen, I have an idea! Waan and I are coming over on the 25th to be with you guys and we are bringing our new 9 month old puppy Pani! Pani is called Pani after pandemic. He Was born on your grandfather Eddie's birthday which was March 1st. I think we should ask Indy and Pani for some ideas! I will think of some for Pani and you can think of some for Indy, looking forward to seeing you! Love U. Nick and Waan and Pani
You have to figure out Jen. It's your story! Dad
ReplyDeletegood question Jen. how about incorporating God?
ReplyDeleteIs she surprised by the price? Does she have the money? What happens when she gets home?
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ReplyDelete'Her eyes widened, the walls seemed to move in on her. Her mouth opened but she couldn't speak! Oh why didn't I let mom come with me? she thought.'
"No, no, it's $75.00, sorry, don't faint on me! Your little brother put me up to this! He's in the same class as Kevin, my son. He's apparently quite jealous that you were allowed to get a tattoo. Ha ha ha so sorry about that, forgive me? Are you feeling a little better now?"
Jen, maybe this might give you a new idea. Or maybe someone else can suggest another direction.
I'm so glad to hear from you again though!
Barbara
Jen, maybe you'd like to come up with a whole new story line. Some writers do that. They begin writing a story and then they leave it and begin another. They'll do that until the story they're on begins to flow until they have a book.
ReplyDeleteI've heard interviews with writers who describe the struggle to write a book. It's often like that.
Barbara
Okay Jen, I have an idea! Waan and I are coming over on the 25th to be with you guys and we are bringing our new 9 month old puppy Pani! Pani is called Pani after pandemic. He Was born on your grandfather Eddie's birthday which was March 1st. I think we should ask Indy and Pani for some ideas! I will think of some for Pani and you can think of some for Indy, looking forward to seeing you! Love U. Nick and Waan and Pani
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