In the little town of Riverdell by the sea, there was a majestic and beautiful house. It was white with blue shutters, a beautiful garden out back was filled with all kinds of flowers. On land you could feel the sea spray when it was windy and see the white caps as the wind blew through the sea.
Sofia was impulsive and wild while her brother, Charlie was the opposite, he was obedient and compassionate. Charlie was the angel of the family while Sofia did her own thing. Sofia's and Charlie's parents were the normal sort of parents. Their mom was kind and loving. Their dad was tough and hardworking.
Wow Jen, your description takes me right to the seaside. I'm interested in getting to know your characters a little more too! A great start.
ReplyDeleteIt is getting warmer here,Jen. I will be looking forward to see your new story every day now.
ReplyDeleteHi everyone. Jennifer is working hard on her story descriptions and taking it very seriously. Right now we are reading out loud a famous book called Bird Song about the first world war. It is the most advanced book we have read together and I think it has motivated her to reach further in her own writing. I am so impressed with your descriptions Jen. I am also impressed that there is not a single spelling or grammatical error in your writing!
ReplyDeleteLove your descriptions! You need a back story to tie the family to the house.
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Hi Felicia, I agree with you. Jennifer's descriptions are so good!
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Barbara
I echo the above comments. I'd like to learn more about this tough and hardworking Dad. And no Felicia, no problems posting.
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